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At 18:36 on June 26, 2009, Seville, Spain held 33rd session of the World Heritage Committee meeting,  theworld cultural heritage project of  Wutai Mountain  have been formally adopted on the World Heritage List. Wutai Mountain has a reputation of "sacred Buddhist country" and "cool shengjing"  It has beautiful scenery and  a long history of Buddhist culture . the success of Wutai Mountain's application, in one hand , is closely related to its own great conditions, on the other hand,  is inseparable to  the tireless efforts of our provincial leadership and the support of people. Mount Wutai's  successful application , has not only  brought immeasurable benefits on  economic and  stimulated the development of  economic on the surrounding area, but also led the tourists of our province into the international market and made the China's status in the world strengthen. the same time we concern the economic benefits WuTai Mountain brought,we must  pay more attention to its protection, only if the natural and cultural resources to be better maintained , it  could has a better development.




maybe there are many mistakes not only in grammer but also in the choose of words.
i think the translation is not good. you can take it as a reference

to tell the truth, i can't really understand what's the meaning of the words  "再思考"


en  maybe:  after the success of application, we can start to think more about the tourism of Wutai Mountain

    Beijing at 18:36 on June 26, 2009, held in Seville, Spain 33rd session of the World Heritage Committee meeting, China Wutai Mountain declared world cultural heritage projects have been formally adopted, inscribed on the World Heritage List. Wutai Mountain scenic area has a "sacred Buddhist country" and "cool shengjing" reputation and beautiful scenery, Buddhist culture is a long history. Mount Wutai's inscription success, simply asked the one hand, closely related to their own conditions, on the other hand with my provincial (crab) House leadership and the people's support and efforts are inseparable. Mount Wutai's inscription success of our province not only has brought immeasurable economic benefits,
Stimulate the surrounding development; also led the tourist attractions in our province into the international market, so that China's increasingly strong international status. Wutai Mountain to bring economic benefits in the province at the same time, we also pay attention to its protection, only the Wutai Mountain natural and cultural resources to be maintained well in order to better develop.

i've made some amendments in the paragraph above. there are some grammatical mistakes.

IN ADDTION Buddhist culture HAS a long history. THE SUCCESS IN Mount Wutai's inscription WAS closely related to their own conditions. On the other hand, THE LEADERSHIP OF OUR provincial House and the people's support and efforts WERE inseparable.  Not only CONTRIBUTE TO immeasurable economic benefits, IT StimulateS the development OF THE SURROUNDING. Also IT allows the tourist spots in our province to gain attraction in the international market, further strengthens China's position internationally. At the same time, we also need to pay attention on its protection, only if the Wutai Mountain's natural and cultural resources are maintained well,  it can develop better.

All the best^^

(At Beijing time June 26th 2009 at 18h36 PM,) At the 33rd UNEWSCO World Heritage Committee Meeting in Seville, Spain, Mount Wutai from China was officially proclaimed as a World Cultural Heritage. Mount Wutai’s cultural landscape is known as “the sacred Buddhist Mountain”, the “imperturbable atmosphere” and recognized for its amazing scenery and its long-standing Buddhist Manjusri worship. In the application of the Mount Wutai’s cultural heritage project, its success is closely linked to not only its own famous conditions, but also to the leadership of our Provincial House and the support of the local population. This success in application of the World Heritage project will bring inestimable economic resources which will stimulate the development of the surrounding area. Furthermore, it will bring international recognition for our provincial tourist attractions and strengthens China’s position internationally. Because of this success, it is important to increase its protection in order to allow its natural and cultural resources to conserve its true nature.


I have some suggestions,
第一，我把时间放在括号里面因为没有什么办法把它给放到那句话里/因为英语不像中文可以写很长的句子。那个是run-on sentence， 是英语里的大忌
第二，你如果想有一个比较好翻译的文章，请您把您的意思少少做一点解释。
第三，我不确定我的般本有什么好处，但是有一点你一定要注意一下，it is June 26th 2009 and NOT June 26 2009, 这个很重要，因为小学一年级就有学到。(所以请不要忘了th)
最后，你可以去UNESCO 网站有专门介绍五台山的网页 可以参考
http://whc.unesco.org/en/list/1279

加油！对了。。其实我法语是最好，英语第二 中文第三，所以你就当参考意见吧

我膜拜你……派派如果在一年前有英语角就好了……