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[Help] help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!English composition. Someone is skillful at it, please help me

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迷雾林(牛刀小试)

楼主 2011-04-10

help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!English composition. Someone is skillful at it, please help me

I plan to take a competition. But I do not believe myself. I hope someone could help me to check my composition before it is sent to the system of the examination.
Please, help me. If you can help me, please let me know. I will appreciate you a lot.

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bobo囹子(牙牙学语)

地板 2011-04-12

What‘s the topic of yourcomposition？
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it has not been noticed, could help me?only when the topic is noticed, can i write it. if you can, please let me know. my phone:13640523232
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迷雾林(牛刀小试)

板凳 2011-04-11

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I really want to do like what you said,but the topic of the composition hasnt been noticed...I really hate that...Then, could help me?

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猪八戒三代(热心会员)

沙发 2011-04-11

Oops.

why dont you finish it, and add it as an attachment, so that anyone passing by can examine it and edit it for you >:D
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the topic has not been noticed, could help me?only when the topic is noticed, can i write it. if you can, please let me know. my phone:13640523232
qq:1048630860

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