引用第4楼wingq_p于2012-04-11 21:04发表的 :
(As it is shown in the picture,) we need to pay attention to this situation because the sad truth is that there are many places needed to be developed and(AND改成AS,是不是更好?) people in the countryside are very poor.
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As is vividly shown in the picture, a country boy is crying helpless in the darkness, longing eagerly for school education. But from the other picture we can see that a city boy is going to school happily. He has many good teachers and good condition in the school. He has a bright environment to enjoy life.
The picture shows that our country has many places need to be developed we need to pay attention to this situation, but the sad truth is that the people in the countryside are very poor.
Fortunately, more and more people are noticing the problems. They have taken steps to help these pitiable children. It is time to take some actions to help these children, such as we can donate some books, clothes and money. It is merely a short-term solution to a long-term problem. If we continue to help these children, we will change more and more children’s life. There is a saying that goes” Many hands make light work '
The picture shows that our country has many places need to be developed we need to pay attention to this situation, but the sad truth is that the people in the countryside are very poor.
Fortunately, more and more people are noticing the problems. They have taken steps to help these pitiable children. It is time to take some actions to help these children, such as we can donate some books, clothes and money. It is merely a short-term solution to a long-term problem. If we continue to help these children, we will change more and more children’s life. There is a saying that goes” Many hands make light work '
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