original version:
As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educates their child in different ways. The child’s father is strict with his soon and his mother love his soon very much.
As far as I’m concerned, I support theirs education way. Parents love their only child very much. It is without doubt that the child will be developed some bad habits. There are many such examples of this. If parents are too strict with his child, the child will be disgusted with his parents. They will consider that parents dislike him. Actually, the two education ways all have two sides, so we need to keep a balance between love and strictness.
With the developing society, parents’ education is playing an increasingly important role in children’s life. So, we should find a right way to educate child. Meanwhile, parents can usually communicate with their child. Parent’s educating child have good character, is a good start towards a better future.
My style:
As you can see in the photo, a young couple educate their child differently. The father is strict with his child;however, the mother spoil the child in another way. I partly agree on the education from the cartoon described. Parents' love is the most selfless love in the world, which will make children feel being loved and cared. However, the balance between loving and spoling is hard to control sometimes. For this child in the cartoon, if the mother spoil him in an extreme way, the child would become some bad habits. In the meanwhile, to be too strict with their children is dangerous sometimes, because the strict way would let the child become more rebelling during his adolescence. Thus, it's hard for parents to control the degree of strictness.
Children grows up in their own way, but parents are supposed to have the most important influence on their children. At that situation, communication becomes a critical issue to educate children well in the morden society. Good communication led good relationship with children. The better you educate you chid, the better people he will be in the future.
结构什么的都不记得了。我只是照着原文稍微改变了一下句型。和错误的句子而已。其他的观点还有例证什么的 都基于原文。
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