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[Free Talk] May you have a good and happy day everyday

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蔚蓝幽雪(专栏作家)

楼主 2010-02-13

the year of tiger is coming.review this year's life, many things are not so good, but be confident about the next year , I can be better if i try my best to do. Don't be afraid of the things happened to me , I can do it because i think i can. the trouble stand before us is our experence of being capablity;the mistakes have made will be my unforgetable memory. tomorrow will be better, next year will have an improvement.

Happy New Year for everyone!

May you have a good and happy day everyday!
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Happy new year. Thank ..
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玉伯乐。(专栏作家)

沙发 2010-02-13

you too,
happy new year ~
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happy new year

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展雯(文学之神)

板凳 2010-02-13

Happy new year!

May you have a good time during the 2010.
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happy new year

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地板 2010-02-13

From the title there is a mistake,and then "well"only describes one's bady is fine but not something. The third "try one's best to do something ",you add another"one".The "afraid" is a ad. and you should use "be afraid of/to do"."What will happen" should be "something will happen to me".What does "I can because" mean?Maybe you want to say "I can believe".
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There are really so many mistakes ...I don't want to correct all of them.
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thank you for your help.

I have corrected some.

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