于是发现上面已经有人改过了……
继续,进行缺德的行为……
同一个连接,不过是沙发不是楼主
然后我懒得写行数了.
"but I never received even one letter except one call, which i just miss..."
but I haven't recieved even one letter except for a call, which i just missed.. "I need to send as more as possible"
I need to send as much as possible "I need someone else help with my homework "
I need someone else to help with my homework"what's else"
what else?"I don't wanna be a last minutes person but I usually do"
I don't want to be a procrastinator but i usually am※一般一个做东西都在最后一刻完成的,被称为procrastinator
"When you think you cannot make it, just think about there are still a lot of people struggle with food and water, you can feel better."
When you think that you cannot make it, just think about all the people who still struggle with food and water, then you can feel better."because we had a imporv activities today, If I were the one who is from one or two years ago, I may feel suck because maybe I cannot understand these kinds of things, but today, I can find fun and do it better. "
because we had an improv① activity② today. If I was③still the one from one or two years ago, I may suck④ because I couldn't understand⑤ these kinds of things, but today, I can find fun in it ⑥ and do it better.※于是,发现这个的错误很多,所以我列出错误来,解释一下
①Improv 拼写错误,还有因为是元音i,所以前面必须是AN
②既然说是AN(一个),所以后面的Activity也必须是一个.
③自己是一个的.
④你不能"感觉到自己SUCK"
⑤因为是在说过去的自己,所以必须用过去式
⑥在哪里找到FUN?
"make yourself happy is the most important thing"
making yourself happy is the most important thing"I think I may more happy after I have a car"
I think that I may be more happy when I have a car"For me, there is few chance to do one thing without purpose expect reading romantic fiction..."
For me, there are few chances ①to do something without a purpose, except② for reading romantic fiction※列出几个重要的错误.其实还有的
①few chances是多个的,所以不能用"is"这个来形容,需要用"are"
②expect是期待,盼望,except是除了
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