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指出错误，并改正。
55层
I was moved
.这句话的语法错误类型是
sf（sentence fragment)意思是语句不完整。
她想说的可能是 I moved.（我搬走了）或者 I was moved by the movie. 我被（电影）所感动。因为单纯的被动是缺少宾语的，如果直译她的句子就是 我被xx感动，sf。
50层
It's quite tough to keep fit
and I will try my best to achieve it.错误类型：
ro（run-on)两个完整句子不能用"coordinating conjunction"连接（拓展阅读：
http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/coordinatingconjunction.htm） 正确使用是：It's quite tough to keep fit； and I will try my best to achieve it.或者使用句号。（标点符号后需要空一格为语法规定）
49层
I'm still very tired ah,
to work overtime. to do something 是属于infinitives，
wf 但明显这里不是表达还要去工作，而是表达：我很累因为我过度工作。所以应该是：I'm still very tired for work overtime.
45层
eyes
are ache 首先缺少定语，定语是必须的，虽然中文貌似不太要求。然后ache是用作名词或者动词. 所以更正：I felt an ache in my eyes.
或者 My eyes ache.
44层Today is Wednesday, I want to eat sausage. ro 应该是：Today is Wednesday; I want to eat sausage.
41层Rianing,raining.i so hate this weathe and so miss sun. sp 拼错了俩 raining weather
33Today I become a formal membership of paipai. vt Today I became a formal membership of paipai.
32 the weather of Guangdong changes often. mm The weather of Guangdong often changes.
31December is the last month of the year 2015,come on baby. ro December is the last month of the year 2015;come on baby.
26love isa lie, it can not be forever, ro+sp Love is a lie; it can not be forever. 后半句我觉得应该是：Love（it） often doesn't last forever. be forever 我不知道有没有错我是没怎么听过，然后can是当做“能力” ，爱 没有能力 作为 永远。我觉得很奇怪。我写的是 爱 一般 不能 持续 到永远。
23today is the frist day of month. sp+sf+p 拼写错误: first 然后month不加定冠词the 就表示 所有月份。所以这句的意思是 今天是每月的第一天。 更正：Today is the first day of this month.
22 It's a new day!Not only it's the new beginning of the month,but also mine ! sf not only, but also 是correlative conjunction。句子明显不完整，然后这句话but also 后面和前面的内容不对称。我使用这个片段，补全了下作为例子：Not only
did December first is the new beginning of this month, but
it also gave me a new chance to earn pb.如果后面是完整句子 do 是必须的，然后后面的主语要在but和also之间。
19
I want I have some good news.
ww I hope I will have some good news.作为预测，应该是我希望，而不是我想要。（个人感觉）然后改变了时态。
18 Every morning is a difficult
family to get up.
dm 早上是个困难家族去起床。虽然family可能是我不知道的用法，但早上作主语的话就变成了早上 起床，而不是你早上起床。“早上”是不能起床的，起床的是你，所以dm了。然后有点怪异，我重写了下：It is tough for me to get up earlier in the morning.
17
Today the weather is good, but the fog haze
, Lu bucket
can't see.
p+ro+dm today 是个introductory material，所以需要一个comma。后面lu bucket 是个人还是特殊名词，特殊名词后面的bucket也要大写，然后我没看懂是啥东西。如果是一个不是人的东西，那也有点问题，因为他不能看，所以这个物品要有能力去看，是dm错误，显然某些物品是不能看的。比如 我能看见鼠标。（无误） 鼠标不能被我看见。（无误） 鼠标不能看。（错误） 更正：Today, the weather is good, but the fog haze; Lu bucket can't be seen.
13
This is
new January new day
, come on.
ww+ro 错词:December 我不记得两个宾语的错误叫什么了。然后更正 This is the new day of December.Come on.
6 I need
coffer.
ww coffee
5 Today is the first time I
Sign in here
, my oral English is so poor,
to practice exercises
= ro sf Today is the first time I sign in here. My oral English is so poor, so I need to practice more exercises .=是大小写错误
错误类型最多的是sf dm ww p 缺少主语太多了，句号错误或者缺少句号，大小写问题懒得贴了。我以为会出现很多代词问题，事实上没人使用代词……
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